I'm at least like, 85% certain that this is the animation Zeurel was referring to about animated shorts now a days having good animation, but lackluster writing, if not, even then I still agree with him, the pacing was all over the place, mainly that it was just really fast in a lot of places and there wasn't much room for it to breath.
Also dissapointed that brick isn't a qt tomboy waifu like I though by looking at the preview
Also Jesus cool it down on the anime references