Your pretty good at music, but you should probably study animation a bit more.
Your pretty good at music, but you should probably study animation a bit more.
Don't worry. I will.
Hey, dude, you have potential, I like these origional characters you got here.
Let me just say that you gotta know when to have animations be fast and when they shuold be slow, like when they're doing that spinning stuff? It should be a lot faster.
thanks, i was trying to match the animation to the musics beat, i guess i have to do better with that :P
but thanks for responding :)
Hah hah! Wow! So edgy and creative! Having a man commit suicide is so hilarious, and then having a parody commercial is just SOOOO origional, I can't believe it hasn't been done before! Oh and what a plot twist, having the commercial guy kill everyone, because everyone dying is such an origional punchline!
No, that was all sarcasm this is just a generic offensive as possible flash that isn't clever at all and makes me sad that someone with such great animating talent wasted there time on this.
But hey, As I just said this was animated pretty well, So I have to give you some good boy points for that.
Cute stuff
That fucking contest bit was insane.
thanks for watching it!
To me, honestly, this wan't funny at all, theres a thing called the rule of three and you just throw that out the window and drive this joke into the ground and by the end I get it and I know what's coming because you just do it over and over AND OVER again.
Also, the voice acting on the purple guy was so cringe worthy, it sounded like he was holding back the whole time with that tone of fake anger in his voice, like his mom is in the house and he doesn't want to be too loud or else he'll get in trouble for saying dick.
That's another thing, If your gonna have a dick in your cartoon, and only show the balls, then you might as well show the whole thing at that point because there's no hiding it anymore, it's not like the balls aren't as bad as the shaft and the head, no the dick and balls is all the same amount of priority.
The animation was nothing to write home about either, it's just the same lame old cyanide and happyness-esque stuff we've all seen before, and you don't even put any effort into it.
I'm only gonna give you two stars because that Nickleback impersonation did make me smile at the end
the reason why the purple guy sounds like that is because that's how his character is. That is his personality. He is not this loud, aggressive, assertive guy, he is this shy guy who occasionally attempts to stick up for himself but it never works. Also, it was just a little bit of the balls showing, it's not like I had both balls hanging out. To me, having the jokes be a little predictable can be charming because it can engage the audience into how absolutely ridiculous and bewildering the situation is, and makes the pay off better leaving the viewer with a positive taste in their mouth. As for the animation, yeah it's similar to cyanide and happiness, but that show has such simple character designs it's hard to not think of it too. The characters did their thing, they told the story, and it resonated with many people so I'm happy about that. Thanks for the review though, I do enjoy the criticism. I hope what I said made sense, it's 3 am and i'm exhausted
You got me with that twist man, it was pretty funny.
Also you have really nice looking lines for flash.
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